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Audi R8 V10 Plus

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Audi R8 V10 Plus
Alfaaz Shaikh@alfaazsharik90
Oct 28, 2016 12:58 AM, 6329 Views
Excellent

Faster speed. nice design. exxellent This shows that you have good academic skills as you are able to see both sides of the issue.


It can also sometimes be a good idea to look at both sides of the argument because it may be easier for you to brainstorm ideas.


If you just look at one side, you may run out of ideas.


In this IELTS sample essay, the writerdisagrees overall with the opinion presented - that alternative medicine is ineffective and possibly dangerous.


However, in the first body paragraph the writer discusses what those who agree with this opinion think.


If you are going to put in an opinion that disagrees with your own, it is common to put this argument first. This makes your argument stronger as you can then refute it in the following paragraph.


As you can see, in the second body paragraph, the writer gives the reasons why he/she disagrees.


In other words:


Body 1 = the disadvantages of alternative medicine


Body 2 = the advantages of alternative medicine


It is then a good balanced conclusion as the writer states that they are best used together


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