A capital letter to start each line... a full stop to pack coherence in a few words...advice packaged in a formal yet interesting way...this website for its purpose has already achieved a great deal... everyone satisfied?...the possibilities though, somehow seem a lot more.... imagine then...thousands?
Of people hammering away at a keyboard....to put in more than 150 words some advice they have for the world at large...what else?...a certain passion for writing...a degree of vanity perhaps...most importantly an incredible amount self driven enthusiasm...so is advice all this website could offer?...
Could we perhaps ask for a little more...before the CEO jumps off his seat...may I appease him and all...small changes are always welcome...and if you’ve noticed the grammar followed by this article...and have not complained to your private copy of wren and martin....
Well then one must ask oneself ...where is the language headed...indeed I mean English...a shame it is that a language deriving its richness from its perennial meanderings must be used merely as a tool and little else...albeit the passion in the words of many here undoubtedly do it justice...but why not change it to meet our age...cheap thrills to make things interesting....a frivolous thought perhaps...worthy?