I think from the title of this review you would have understood that this story is a copy of famous Author E.L Jamess Fifty Shades Of Grey.
However, the new thing you will find is the desi melodrama. Just like a copy of Hollywood movies are made in Bollywood style.
The narration of the story is not very effective like you will say to yourself, Today I have read a very good story. No, nothing like that. But I appreciate author efforts. She worked hard and thats why she is best selling author. But this book is not very appealing. It is not written effectively. It is not edited properly. So this is the reason why it affects the readability and story. Hope the upcoming work of author will be great.