Well it is a funny ad overall.
Few things which make me comment about the ad.
Paresh rawal : hello dominoes ek large pizza bhejna
Large pizza?
Doesnt he have any choices tandoor paneer pizza or peperoni pizza etc.
Just large pizza?
WOW.
And he dint even mention size
whats large? - 10inch , 12 , 14?
And the time he ordered pizza - wow!
yeh time pe koi pizaa khata hai kya?
And at that time they can deliver in 10 mins also what took them 20 mins
If he had ordered at 8 pm then it would have taken atleast 1 hr ?
So if he wants free then better change his calling time.
In the end he also gets coke I think which he dint order.
Good.
And then he says tumko time pe aane ki bimari hai ?
Well if he knows they have this bimari why he ordered in first place.
Why didnt he eat ghatia and jalebi.
mann !