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S B@akisha
Nov 14, 2005 06:38 PM, 2914 Views
(Updated Nov 14, 2005)
That which no one can bring me….

I may as well declare at the outset – this review can be of no conceivable use to anyone. None at all.


So read on at your own risk.


All the stars have faded away


except the one


lying in the moon’s cradle


yes, that one


the one closest to the moon


It reminds me of you and me


At times close, others afar


bound by invisible threads


….something more than love


…and less than obsession?




  1. That star I wish to hold in my hand.




When I look at my mother,


I always see the worry in her eyes.


The haunting worry that comes from losing your partner early in life.


The worry that robs you of  warmth and security.


The kind that matures you overnight and makes you  cautious,


ever afraid of losing again.


That restless nagging feeling that something is wrong, even when you know it’s not.




  1. That warmth I wish I could get back for her.




That look in your eyes


which meant you finally knew


who I was


and what you felt for me




  • without -




all the pain


that preceded


….or followed it?




  1. Can I just have that moment again….




  2. A cottage by the sea






where I can feel the


warmth of the sun


on my head


and dig


bare toes into the ground


while I yet figure out


all the colours of the tumultuous sea?




  1. That cottage can you get me?




A dress that contains


all the shifting colors of the sky


as the sun sets


a texture of clouds


a sprinkling of peace


a twinkling of bells


and just a delicate smithereen of starlight?




  1. That’s all that my heart’s desire be


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