I appreciate your work in producing good Hindi serials. I am 65 years old and works as Engineering Consultant in Dubai.
However there is scope of improvement which some time annoys me due to very much away from realities of life and social environments existing in our Indian Society. To quote some of them as follows: -
There are very rare chances in the existence of human race that two identical persons are found without being twins.
The Actor vanishes from the scene for many years and appears again all of sudden leaving very unpleasant feeling. Suspense can be created in other ways also.
When there is a shooting or killing scene there is no activity of police to contain the movement of the culprit. But in your serials the actor move freely and attempt again to shoot the person. Where as in actual he will be running away from police whole of his life until caught and punished.
The most annoying thing is dialogues between the Vamp and good person. The vamp keeps on speaking in cunning style and will not allow the person to speak. In reality, other person will shout at the vamp and fight back. there is no tolerance in real life the way you show in the serials.
You are using background sound to convey thoughts of the person instead of actual dialogues.
The most annoying thing is replacing of the actor by changing the face by surgery without caryying for the pitch of sound the other person is producing and the quality of face expressions.
I suggest that the above points should be considered to improve the quality of Serials. Please do not extend the serials for the Heck of it. If the story dictates only then extend the serials. Last but not least, Please produce Serials with Light Comody with important social theme. You have earned lot of money by making commercail serials, now is the time to produce some social reform serials instead of spoiling the athics of Indian Marriages. Show the couple to have more time together to understand each other instead of living with the spouse in the same house for 20 years before marrying.
You are of my daughter’s age therefore I will convey my love to you.
Your fatherly
Tejbir S. Gatohora
P.O.Box 80736
Dubai- UAE
Tel No. 0097150-6340297 (m)
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