The Invisible Man doesnt appear to understand what its doing; in fact, it appears being all over the place. Griffins personality illustrates that not all college degrees come with a touch a rationality. He enters a motel(we never learn why he was working with explosives when was previously invisible), then begins blackmailing people and wanting(view spoiler) The Jacobins had more organisations than him! We are constantly distracted by recollections and an albinos abrupt, purposeless madness.
Wekks establishes an ill-tempered protagonist from the start, erecting a masssive barrier between the reader and the plot, as little sympathy can be felt for the Invisible Man. When you combine that with the monotonous writing style, it feels like youre reading a childrens book.
Unfortunately for Wells, hethen committed the worst blunder in albino history, shattering all creditibility into broken glass. The Invisible Man no longer read as imagination; it read as bollocks. Thats a real tragedy because the plot has so much potential.
Conclusion
Drop this book and dont be invisible. Make your dream up and grab another one.