Hi everyone,
Been busy for the coming activities we have in our local govt. here. We are going to celebrate our Barangay Week starting March 30 to April 5,2009. There will be lots of activities and contest like, sportsfest; job fair,dance contest; BF Idol; Miss BF; medical and dental mission and many more. March is also graduation month where there are so many day care centers who will hold there Recognition and Graduation days. And its surely a hectic schedules for everyone us here, in our office. It is in this regard that I am telling you friends that I may not be online so often from now on, to post my diary post but maybe I will just read and comment,as much as possible. So, for the moment I am posting the poem of my dear friend Nithinjacob and my comment as reply to his poem. I just hope you won't get bored reading our thoughts again here. I just like this poem thats why I want to share it on my diary post.
Nithin and I usually have related ideas when it comes to writing poems.We have proven that many times,despite our age gap we prove that ideas knows no age or time, education or social status in life. Emotions and realization is part of writing some of our poems straight from the heart. May that, from our poems we can be part of your inspirations.
Here's the poem of Nithinjacob:
After the twilight.
Posted on Feb 27, 2009 under Poetry
As I walk alone in this wilderness
As I walk alone in this downpour
My long hair and this black jacket,
My pale face and sweet memories
The skies and this blur around me
Somewhere deep within, so deep
Not knowing how much I loved
Not knowing how much I lived
This pretty face, this simple life
Walking alone in this spell of rain,
This mighty sky and this blur,
Drop by drop and I stand still
My long hair and black jacket…
Downpour wash away all the dust…
Downpour wash away all the dust…
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Here's my reply:
Hi NJ,
By: | Feb 27, 2009 07:49 PM
Just tryin again to response to ur feelings in a poem.
THE POEM:
After the twilight,
My eyes looks up the sky.
I wish for the stars,
But it seems not there,
Or maybe its just so far.
After the twilight,
I see the dust covered shadow
Of a man in black jacket
And how I wish t’was you.
Yes, after the twilight
Came the dark clouds,
It pours out some rain
T’was just a little shower
And later came the strong wind.
Drip.drip.drip.
The sound I hear.
Then, I realized,
The dust covered shadow was you.
As the rain washed away,
the dust on your face.
And your long hair are wet,
Yes. after the twilight,
You seemed to enjoy God’s grace.
by angel_babe55